Episode 11 - Intrinsic
Okay gang, I am going to post half today and half on Sunday or Monday. It's a whopper of a story by fanfiction standards, that's why I am splitting it and because studying for tests put me behind....
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Title: IntrinsicAuthor: JackieIntrinsic: belonging to something or someone as an inherent and essential part of their nature.Thesaurus: essential, fundamental, central, inherent, natural, basic,...
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ACT 1September 24, 20051530 LocalMaritime Museum Of San DiegoRMS Titanic ExhibitSan Diego, CaliforniaThe EMT crew pushed through a small crowd that gathered around. Harm was sitting on the floor, his...
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ACT 2April 10, 19120645 Local RMS TitanicD Deck, First-Class Dining SaloonSomewhere In The North Atlantic OceanLight classical music echoed through the walls of the RMS Titanic as its first class...
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ACT 3April 12, 19121345 Local RMS TitanicBoat DeckSomewhere In The Atlantic OceanSarah took a deep, cleansing breath as she stepped out of the door to the stairwell and onto the pine expanses of the...
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ACT 4 April 13, 19122012 LocalRMS Titanic1st-Class Promenade DeckSomewhere In The North AtlanticYou seem upset tonight, Sarah, is something the matter? After dinner, the MacKenzie women had decided to...
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I like this story so far. I will admit that I was one of *those* girls that saw Titanic multiple times at the movies (only twice) and I am not ashamed, LOL. I just wonder what is wrong with Mac, I...
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What a neat episode.... it's nice to have an alternate reality once in a while. Great story so far! I laughed so hard when I read Michael Brumby? The owner of Brumby, Lowne and Farrow. Brumby the...
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Thanks for the story, and for the pic' (nice one!) Good chance for your test ! Lt jg Tina Schiparelli " If you don't like my driving.......get off the sidewalk !! "
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Radiorox, Again an absolutely wonderful story. I can't wait until your next instalment. I had picked up on the timeline as well, but no harm done.Please don't leave us out in the cold too long. It was...
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Hey gang, thanks for catching that little year problem. It shoudl be 1904 for the first flashback and 1906 for the second. I'll go back and change them in a bit. Thanks for the feedback, I hope you...
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ACT 6September 24, 20052130 LocalMercy HospitalSan Diego, CaliforniaThe tests had been done. The scans were run and still they couldnt find what was wrong with Mac. The doctor had agreed to wheel her...
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ACT 7September 25, 20050035 LocalMercy HospitalSan Diego, CaliforniaThe only reason he wasnt kicked out after visiting hours was because Harm had done everything possible to remain the model visitor....
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Loved it, loved it, loved it! This was a nice change of pace from the usual episodes! Way to go Radiorox. I really enjoy your style of writing. Can't wait until your next fanfic endeavor! Corporal...
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Good job my dear. I liked the pics you included and the timeline thingy was no biggie, i just thought I was missing something, LOL. I was nervous for a minute cause I thought something might really be...
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Congratulations on a story well told, Radiorox. I truly enjoyed the change of pace in this story. Thank you for sharing it with us.With talented writers like you we could continue our Summer Season...
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Oh my goodness! PO Gormley is now the FOJ resident genius! Season 11... followed by season 12....followed by season 13... yeah! I'd be up for writing a contribution or two. Who's with us?! Corporal...
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Breathtakingly brilliant as usual Radiorox. The Season is going from strength to strength. (Can we have the next part of 'Return to Me' now? Please?)
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Radiorox, you out did yourself with this one. It is one of your best. Just loved it. The shows writers could have taken a few lessons from the fanfic writers like you. Looking forward to the...
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Oh My! I was finally able to devote the time to read this story, and I am so glad I did. I managed to read it in one sitting from start to finish - all becasue I just 'couldn't put it down!' What a...
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